Peer Assessment

After Peer Assessment

After several opinions given to me I have decided to change my piece a lot.

Overall, I will have a completely different colour scheme as the blue 'dulled' the piece a little, and white was suggested as a suitable colour. A scenic background was also suggested, so I will visit a few locations around Hull and take photographs of them to possibly use.  I also have been advised to re-take my photos which I was already planning on doing.

Front cover changes:

I will change a few things on my front cover, firstly, I will remove the background colour and use a plain white background. I will also change a few of the cover lines. I would also prefer more than one photo on the cover, this could mean that I could use a photo of Matt, which was my previous idea.
Contents changes:

I will keep the contents page quite similar to the first draft. This is because of the structure, as I quite like the way it is set out. However, I will change the colour scheme to match the rest of the blog 

DPS changes:

I will completely change my double page spread, this is because of my change of idea. It was pointed out that the page break in the centre of my piece would go over my text.